before_revision: Sports presenter for 3 News has given an unsatisfactory letter of apology after he abused a taxi driver in Taupo while he was drunk. The taxi driver, Mere Wall, was verbally abused by Brown on September 13 where he, allegedly, called Wall a "Tuwharetoa whore and bitch," and a "Tainui whore and bitch." Brown was then punched by the partner of a woman he had insulted.  Brown sent an unsigned letter of apology to Wall, which Wall said she received last week , she had asked for one after the incident occurred . Wall said she was unhappy with the letter  and has written to TV3 to complain. Wall said that the letter was two paragraphs long and said that due to a concussion Brown cannot remember the incident  but if he did do something wrong then he is sorry. The letter contained no return address but she said: "I have written to TV3 [about the letter]." Wall hopes to get a better apology. However Wall has admitted that she did make some comments about Brown after the incident, Wall said: "But it has gone on and on." Brown was stood down after the incident by TV3 and Roger Beaumont, a spokesman for TV3, said that he is still not back at work and it is unsure when,  if, he returns . "The investigation is still continuing. TV3 and police were investigating the incident but it is not known how long the investigation would take." TV3 was also conducting their own investigation of which included hiring a private investigator. They said that they are not ruling out any disciplinary action if the allegations are proved to be correct.
after_revision: Clint Brown, a sports presenter for 3 News , has given a reportedly "unsatisfactory" letter of apology after he abused a taxi driver in Taupo while drunk. The taxi driver, Mere Wall, was verbally abused by Brown on September 13 where he, allegedly, called Wall a "Tuwharetoa whore and bitch," and a "Tainui whore and bitch." Brown was then punched by the partner of a woman he had insulted. Wall had asked for an apology after the incident. Brown sent an unsigned letter of apology to Wall, which Wall said she received last week . Wall said she was unhappy with the letter , and has written to TV3 to complain. Wall said that the letter was two paragraphs long , and stated that Brown cannot remember the incident due to concussion, but if he did do something wrong then he is sorry. The letter contained no return address . Wall hopes to get a better apology, saying "I have written to TV3 [about the letter]." Wall admits to making some comments about Brown after the incident, Wall said: "But it has gone on and on." Brown was stood down after the incident by TV3 . Roger Beaumont, a spokesman for TV3, said that he is still not back at work and it is unsure when, or if, he will return . "The investigation is still continuing. TV3 and police were investigating the incident but it is not known how long the investigation would take." TV3 was also conducting their own investigation , which included hiring a private investigator. They are not ruling out any disciplinary action if the allegations are proved to be correct.
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