before_revision: The heavy fuel oil that is leaking from the beached Italian ship is extremly dangerous for the environment and the fear for pollution was getting bigger after the ship was further damaged after storms last Thursday. MSC Napoli was beached by Devon coastguards after it suffered heavy structual damage in the gale force storms on ThursdayJanuary 18  2007 which wreaked havoc across Northern Europe. The ship, which contains 160 containers of hazardous chemical substances  is listing at 35 degrees.
after_revision: The heavy fuel oil that is leaking from the beached Italian ship is extremely dangerous for the environment . Fear of pollution increased after the ship was further damaged during storms last Thursday. MSC Napoli was beached by Devon coastguards after it suffered heavy structual damage in the gale force storms of Thursday, 18 January 2007 , that wreaked havoc across Northern Europe. The ship, which contains 160 containers of hazardous chemical substances , is listing at 35 degrees.
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