before_revision: Map highlighting Sevenoaks, England. A woman, reported to be an expert in martial arts, has been shot dead by police in a car park behind M&Co, a women's clothing shop in Sevenoaks, Kent, England. According to reports, the woman pulled a weapon on police who then shot her. A bus station in Sevenoaks has been shut down and closed off to the public while police investigate the incident. A tent has been placed over the crime scene to ensure that evidence is kept intact.
after_revision: Map highlighting Sevenoaks, England. A woman, reported to be an expert in martial arts, has been shot dead by police in a car park behind M&Co, a women's clothing shop in Sevenoaks, Kent, England. According to reports, the woman pulled a gun on police who then shot her. A bus station in Sevenoaks was shut down and closed off to the public while police investigated the incident. A tent was placed over the crime scene to ensure that evidence was kept intact.
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