before_revision: A 34 year old obstetrician from Forestville on Sydney's Northern Beaches has escaped after he was robbed, car-jacked and locked in the boot (trunk) while his BMW was set alight. Police say the Doctor was in locked in the boot while his car was set alight, but was allowed to escape before flames engulfed the vehicle. Police allege that the men drove to several locations to withdraw cash and buy things before driving to Carisbook Street in Linley Point at around 4 AM where they set the car alight with the doctor still in the boot. Crime Manager of the Harbourside Local Area Command, Detective Inspector Houlahan said  " He heard a click in the boot area and he heard someone call out: 'Get out of the car'" Det Insp Houlahan said the doctor told police he did not unlock the boot himself, and it appeared the man's captors unlocked it before fleeing. He could only provide police with a vague description of his captors, but said the men were both caucasian males aged in their 20s, and that one of them was about six feet tall (183cm) with short blond hair and medium build said Det Insp Houlahan.
after_revision: A 34 year old obstetrician from Forestville on Sydney's Northern Beaches has escaped after he was robbed, car-jacked and locked in the boot (trunk) of his BMW, which was set alight. Police say the doctor was locked in the boot while his car was set alight, but was allowed to escape before flames engulfed the vehicle. Police allege that the men drove to several locations to withdraw cash and buy things before driving to Carisbook Street in Linley Point at around 4 a.m. local time where they set the car alight with the doctor still in the boot. Crime Manager of the Harbourside Local Area Command, Detective Inspector Houlahan said that the doctor then " heard a click in the boot area and he heard someone call out: 'Get out of the car'" Det . Insp. Houlahan said the doctor told police he did not unlock the boot himself, and it appeared the man's captors unlocked it before fleeing. He could only provide police with a vague description of his captors, but said the men were both Caucasian males aged in their 20s, and that one of them was about six feet tall (183cm) with short blond hair and medium build said Det . Insp. Houlahan.
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