before_revision: A serial killer found on Mumbai's streets killed  another person last night; making him one of five young men murdered  . The body of a 20-year-old unidentified man was found in a secluded spot on the railway tracks between Churchgate and Grant Road . His head crushed by a 10 kg stone. A senior police official said that they had found food at the crime scene, indicating that the victim had been offered it before being bludgeoned.
after_revision: A serial killer on Mumbai's streets killed yet another person last night; making the latter one of five young men murdered recently . The body of a 20-year-old unidentified man was found in a secluded spot on the railway tracks between Churchgate and Grant Road , his head was crushed by a 10 kg stone. A senior police official said that they had found food at the crime scene, indicating that the victim had been offered it before being bludgeoned.
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