before_revision: Campaign against Armenia Till the summer of 34 BCE  Antony waited in Alexandria till he made his attack in early September. The Armenian troops attempted to put up resistance but were no match for the Romans. On September 18th Antonys troops entered the capital and captured Artavasdes II . He was then brought to Alexandria and was kept imprisoned by Cleoptatra till he was executed in 31 BCE. Rome maintained control over Armenia till the Final war of the Roman Republic. In 20 BCE  Augustus negotiated a peace treaty between Rome and Parthia  which led to Armenia becoming a buffer state between the two .
after_revision: Campaign Until the summer of 34 BCE , Antony waited in Alexandria , and he made his attack in early September. The Armenian troops attempted to put up resistance but were no match for the Romans. On September 18, Antony's troops entered the capital and captured Artavasdes II , who was then brought to Alexandria and was kept imprisoned by Cleoptatra until he was executed in 31 BCE. Rome maintained control over Armenia till the Final war of the Roman Republic. In 20 BCE , Augustus negotiated a peace treaty between Rome and Parthia , which led to Armenia becoming a buffer state between them .
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