before_revision: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the  Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club , the South Sydney Rabbitohs . The men required  75\% of the clubs members to vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass , narrowly winning by just 32 votes (0.8\%). Former Souths player and manager, URLe Piggins, has vowed never to attend another game of his former club. Supporters of the bid have said it gives the Rabbitohs a chance to return to their glory days after last year's finish of 13th in the 15 team competition. The team has not won a premiership in 35 years but still retains the record for most Premiership wins  with 20 on the record books. Those against the bid have claimed the club is selling out 98 years of heritage.
after_revision: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the South Sydney Rabbitohs, an Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club . The men required that 75\% of the club's members vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass ; and it narrowly won, by just 32 votes (0.8\%). Former Souths player and manager, URLe Piggins, has vowed never to attend another game of his former club. Supporters of the bid have said it gives the Rabbitohs a chance to return to their glory days after last year's finish of 13th in the 15-team competition. The team has not won a premiership in 35 years but still retains the record for most Premiership wins , with 20 on the record books. Those against the bid objected that the club is selling out 98 years of heritage.
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