before_revision: His name was Kimveer Gill . A 25 year old Laval man who was wearing all black, with combat boots and a black trench coat. He also sported a short black mohawk. He was carrying 3 gunson him, an automatic rifle, a hand-gun, and another weapon .
after_revision: The gunman was Kimveer Gill , a 25 year old Laval man . He was carrying three guns: a Beretta Cx4 Storm carbine, a Glock 9mm handgun, and a Norinco HP9-1 sawed-off shotgun .
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