before_revision: Graham grew noticeably weaker over the course of the past several weeks, suffering from degenerative osteoarthritis of the back and neck. She also underwent treatment for pneumonia two weeks ago. She asked for her feeding tube to be removed Wednesday , after her request, and consultation with family . Billy Graham made a mention of her during the dedication of his library, saying that she was bedridden, and that she was "getting closer to meeting God in heaven." He also announced that the couple will be buried at the library.
after_revision: Graham had grown noticeably weaker over the course of the past several weeks, suffering from degenerative osteoarthritis of the back and neck. She also underwent treatment for pneumonia two weeks ago. She asked for her feeding tube to be removed Wednesday ; following her request, and after consultation with her family, she ceased to receive further nutrients . Billy Graham made a mention of her during the dedication of his library, saying that she was bedridden, and that she was "getting closer to meeting God in heaven." He also announced that the couple will be buried at the library.
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