before_revision:  Memorial's gray panels rise above the crowd. The Minnesota World War II Veterans Memorial was dedicated Saturday on in front of the State Capitol. The memorial features ten glass panels etched with text and scenes from World War II, within a plaza area at the foot of a mall leading to the front entrance to the Capitol. The glass panels are three feet wide, eight feet tall, and mounted on Minnesota granite. Well over twelve thousand people attended. Stan Turner was the Master of Ceremonies during the dedication. The keynote speaker was General John Vessey(Ret. ). Among the many veterans honored were Stan Kowalski and "Chuck" Lindberg; the latter was one of those who raised the first flag over Iwo Jima. Contruction was authorized by the State Legislature in 2000.
after_revision: 300px| Memorial's gray panels rise above the crowd. The Minnesota World War II Veterans Memorial was dedicated Saturday in front of the State Capitol. The memorial features ten glass panels etched with text and scenes from World War II, within a plaza area at the foot of a mall leading to the front entrance to the Capitol. The glass panels are three feet wide, eight feet tall, and mounted on Minnesota granite. Well over twelve thousand people attended. Stan Turner was the Master of Ceremonies during the dedication. The keynote speaker was retired general John Vessey. Among the many veterans honored were Stan Kowalski and "Chuck" Lindberg; the latter was one of those who raised the first flag over Iwo Jima. Construction was authorized by the State Legislature in 2000.
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