before_revision: The man who took a gut feel of seeing personal computers in every household three decades and each will require a stable operating system will now pursue philanthropic activities under the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation. As Gates leaves day-to-day operations, two people will assume the his two vital duties. Craig Mundie will handle the company's long-term planning while Ray Ozzie will handle the operations. Bill Gates founded Microsoft in 1975 and from then has dominated the market for operating systems in personal computers. Gates managed close to 78,000 employees in 103 countries all over the world.
after_revision: The man who took a gut feeling of seeing personal computers in every household , each requiring a stable operating system will now pursue philanthropic activities under the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation. As Gates leaves day-to-day operations, two people will assume his two vital duties. Craig Mundie will handle the company's long-term planning while Ray Ozzie will handle the operations. Bill Gates founded Microsoft in 1975 which has since dominated the market for operating systems in personal computers. Gates managed close to 78,000 employees in 103 countries all over the world.
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