before_revision: David Cosgrove was placed in Holsworthy military prison in October, 2005 for upto 14 days after going AWOL from his Singleton barracks. When released he is alleged to have breached "unit standing orders" and was administratively warned he was "unsuitable for service". It is believed that he will leave the Army by March, 2006. David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels . Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported . It is also thought to be embarrasing for General Cosgrove who led a  40-year military career before retiring to become an executive at Qantas.
after_revision: David Cosgrove was placed in Holsworthy military prison in October, 2005 for up to 14 days after going AWOL from his Singleton barracks. When released he is alleged to have breached "unit standing orders" and was administratively warned he was "unsuitable for service". It is believed that he will leave the Army by March, 2006. David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at the senior level . Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper for reporting the incident . It is also thought to be an embarrasment for General Cosgrove who led a much celebrated 40-year military career before retiring to become an executive at Qantas.
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